Striding along the part
where life maneuvers me,
not comprehending where i am headed
but trusting the lines so true
Gravity kept me grounded
and the wind helped me move
to this ghetto where i headed
scary were my guts, so blue!
My mind refused to scramble
but my heart was leading the way,
creepy feelings accompany me
as i try to clinch my way through
Travelling through this phase
i behold and gulp in all those thoughts
which were hovering over my mind
and making me feel so insecure
As i moved on crossing, dodging
those valley of spooky feelings
i saw a light so bright touching me
as if it was the holygrail required
to push me all the way through
Ps. Title Suggested by Archana Kapoor! Thanks.

Beautiful thought Az! Loved it! God bless π
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Thanks, i am glad you liked it π
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Lovely Thoughts !
Scarf Dress
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Thanks for stopping by Ananya π
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Nice words.
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Thanks Sir π
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Beautifully penned, Aziz. Loved it. π
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Hey Kiran, thanks, glad you liked it π
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Trepidation is expressed so strong here. I guess all of us are looking for that holy-grail of our lives. Hope you have found yours Aziz π Good luck!
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Hey Tara, feelings are expressed when you go through those experience, i am still to find my holy-grail thou ! But the journey so far has inspired me to put this up.
Appreciate your kind words ! Thanks for visiting and comments, means a lot !
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Beautifully penned down..Loved the flow π Kudos
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Hey Maitreni, Thanks for the kind words, i am glad you liked the flow !:)
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Lovely thoughts and i like the painting too…so very well goes with your words π
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Hey Alok, see i told you in my comment about abstract painting, you have a eye for it ! you were the first to notice the painting and comment on it. You just got my coordination between the write up and painting and got it band on ! Thanks for the wonderful and inspiring words !
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I am still learning and just started appreciating Abstract works. That’s an indeed beautiful painting and i couldn’t stop myself writing about it. You’re most welcome π
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Thats an optimistic poem Aziz π and the painting so suits your words…loved it π
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Hi Shweta, i am glad you liked it ! exactly the point i said to Alok, you also got the coordination precisely ! π
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And I always thought I had an analytic mind π
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the holy grail of life…the ultimate goal….very nicely penned… π
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Hi Maniparna, Indeed, the ultimate goal is not far away when you tap your route towards success ! Thanks and i glad you liked it !
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Very nice lovely thoughts !
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Thanks, glad you liked it !
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Beautifully Written!
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Hey MS, thanks for stopping by !
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Lovely! And the art looks great too π
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Thanks Deepa for those words, truly appreciate it!
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You’ve got such a deep chain of thoughts going on here! Well written, Aziz! I couldn’t have thought of a title more apt than this! The art looks great too π
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Beautiful thought..it took me to different world..No looking back..felt so good..words were flowing like a sea waves…My mind breezing through winds.
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Beautiful π
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wish i could find my guiding light too. So often it shined like a mirage and tears through my dreams. thought provoking indeed
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So beautifully expressed. Everytime I visit a poem written by you, I am touched. We all spend our lifetimes searching for that guiding light(person/mentor), but if we are lucky to find it, it can lead to achieving great strides.
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Wow. Interesting & Intriguing. I like the way your words resonate with feelings.
Very well penned err typed π
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Is that painting by you? I am unable to decide whether the painting is good or your poetry better?
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