Trying to understand the simplicity
without knowing the complexity
i plunge into to find out
with no experience of diversityDoes this make sense to you?
souring beneath and understanding
there is no ending from where i began
how well it was simplified
it baffled me from insidehard to believe what i saw
i couldn’t figure out what to do
there were no pearls in the ocean
which i came looking to ..I took the wrong track,
deceived in words and trust,
I was shattered and terrified
there was nothing i could do,
felt so helpless,
it was like drowning in the deep blue
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Wow nice lines…And yes it does make sense to simplify things and once simplified we can take on the complex things…
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Well depicted Harsha …
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beautiful lines
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Thanks Ali Bhai .. always a pleasure receiving your comments !
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Nice self-introspection. Like the beautiful weave of words.
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Thanks Sir, appreciate your comments !
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I recall a quote – ……It is so simple to be happy. But it is so difficult to be simple…..You write from heart…Keep it up dear….Stay blessed..!!!
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Thanks Jeetendra for your kind words and appreciation .. means a lot .. and thanks for commenting ..
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🙂 Thanks, Keep up the nice work…!!!
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You going deep within.. and I can sense that through this.. composition ! I am lacking words of praise .. brother ..
I took the wrong track.. deceived in words and trust… amazing !! not all of us even realize this and when we do, we still continue .. befooling ourselves..
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Mysay, thanks for your encouraging words … helps me slip through some more short poems ..
and yes, we still continue to be-fool ourself due to situations which do not turn in our favor …
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🙂
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Some things are complex and cannot be simplified. That’s one problem with life. But we can raise ourselves to that complexity. It needs effort, a little bit, that’s all.
I enjoyed reading this because, as Jack has said above, you seem to be probing deep – “the effort” I spoke of.
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Yes Sir, when complexity ruins our mind and soul .. it take a little effort to get off it ..
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Complexities of life. Sometimes, words and acts have another meaning, quite different from what we perceive.
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Yes, its complex to make people understand your intend !
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Nice one…. Pearls are definitely there, only thing we are unable to find with our eyes 🙂
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Pearls are are visible in the deep blue … but deception makes it difficult to find!!
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Very Nice. . .
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Thanks !
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Very well said. Simplicity in everything clears all complexities and we do find pearls as we move down life.
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lovely lilt!
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Simplicity is the utmost sophistication…true as they say!!
Well composed!
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Thanks Kirti !! you summed it short !
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Simplification can help us find way through complexity 🙂
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Well written Aziz! We spend a lot of time talking about simplicity, which perhaps shows that many people feel simplicity is a difficult, complicated subject.
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As usual, a good piece. As for simplicity and complexity, it all depends on the kind of person you are. Some people can make a simple situation complex and some will solve complex issues with simplicity 🙂
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You seem to be a simple sould with a lot of depth, I wish, we all could take some time off from our busy schedules to unravel and to rediscover ourselves
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Simple living high thinking.. mantra of life can take you to next level.. It really touched my heart.. Keep it going 🙂
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Beautiful. And I love how you have kept the language so simple, yet making a deep impact.
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“There were no pearls in the ocean which I came looking to” I could relate so well to this line! It feels so good to read your blog. Keep it going 🙂
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This is so true for many situations. We do not realize at the moment that while looking for those pearls and doing all that hard work even though we have been befooled, we have had a great experience and learnt what not to do in future. Have to come out of that feeling of failure sooner than later. Because its not a failure but a stepping stone to well deserved success
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Beautifully written….well expressed. Simplicity is your strength and you have aptly churned emotions into words. Wow!
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I guess sometimes we need complexity to settle down the chaos and bring upon simplicity. It is such a beautiful poem Aziz. The beauty of your poem is that the lines rhyme with life and state of affairs. Glad that you express it so well. Keep it up!
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